tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3371554764910987286.post9122704867836259221..comments2016-05-01T18:58:24.822-07:00Comments on Jo Taylor - Characteristically Speaking: Lightning! And Thunder!Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06134723966971922384noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3371554764910987286.post-19357768770288198582010-10-18T20:31:27.824-07:002010-10-18T20:31:27.824-07:00Lauren - Thank you!
Margaret - You are the bomb! ...Lauren - Thank you!<br /><br />Margaret - You are the bomb! Thank you. I really do like things to be as good as possible. Changed both of the errors (you may review at at ANY time).Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06134723966971922384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3371554764910987286.post-39758420428859507802010-10-18T08:27:21.686-07:002010-10-18T08:27:21.686-07:00Lovely start. You leave plenty of unanswered quest...Lovely start. You leave plenty of unanswered questions: Who is Dina? Why would Margaret's mother warn her through the Quija board? Why is her father so intent on her going to Dina's? - To make your readers want to come back for more.<br /><br />Saw two typos - sorry - suddenly feel like I'm doing an FS review ;) My changes in parenthesis - <br /><br />Margaret stood in the middle of her room, dressed and ready, but trying desperately to thing (think) of a way to get out of going to Dina's house for supper.<br /><br />She hope (hoped) that Mama would understand, and knew that Daddy wouldn't.<br /><br />Love what I've read so far<br />mmcromance57https://www.blogger.com/profile/03882933380906451503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3371554764910987286.post-47103835037448104742010-10-17T19:20:34.198-07:002010-10-17T19:20:34.198-07:00I love it! Can't wait for more!I love it! Can't wait for more!Captain and Crewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03602870506811815200noreply@blogger.com